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UnderShrunk: Part 1- Falling

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Me: Samantha, 18 year-old girl,wavy/curly strawberry blonde hair, hazel eyes and pale skin. Size of your thumb. Has a dark blue hooded cloak on and has blue rimmed glasses.))

I find myself falling.....and falling and falling down a large hole. Until I suddenly feel a tingling sensation before hitting the ground, being knocked unconscious...

30 minutes later

I slowly open my eyes, and with a groan, I sit up with my hand on my forehead. I look around.....I couldn't see in great detail, being near sighted and all.... I look/glance around for my glasses..I finally spot them on the ground nearby. I lean and reach out for them. I pick them up, put them on and look around. Something suddenly occurs to me...how did i survive the fall?and......why is everything so BIG!?

I stand up quickly but the object i was on moved/bent, causing me to fall onto the 'actual' ground. I get up swiftly and look to see what i was on before.....

'wait is that...a flower?!'I think in my mind.

I look around, seeing myself surrounded by flowers...

"The flowers must have broken my fall"

"hmm.....i wonder..... where am I anyways?"i say looking around as i begin to walk, although i feel slight aches and pains on my body.

" eh it's probably a few cuts and bruises...i should be fine"I say walking through the forest of flowers

It takes about a half hour to make it through to the first room, where there's nothing but a single, smiling flower adorning the room. He doesn't seem to notice you at first, "...Where are they, they should be here by now!"


I see that the flower has a face. I barely managed to hold back a gasp. 'what the heck? okay this, has GOT to be dream now......right?' I think to myself.

The hood of my hooded cloak Is up, hiding my face. I look around to see if there is anything around for me to hide behind like a rock or something

Nothing to hide behind...



"Wait, I-is that, o-oh, Howdy!" He says when he finally notices you, "You must be new to the underground, huh?"

He notices that im small...

I freeze when I hear the flower talk. I gulp and look at him. I tremble slightly, just realizing how big he was compared to me....

"H...hi um d..dont mind me..i.im just passing through..." I say. I try to speed walk around him.

"Can I have two minutes of your time?" He asks, "I wanna show you the ropes, the Underground is a dangerous place."

I pause....

"W..who are you?...and dangerous? Doesnt that make you dangerous too?"

"I'm Flowey, " He says, "Flowey the flower! And no, I'm not dangerous, I'm the one monster down here not looking for revenge against humans!"

"underground? m..monsters?! ...im dreaming right?...."I ask, keeping my distance.

"Anyway, " Your soul appears in front of you, " As long as you stay out of sight, you should be okay, but I've got something that can protect you just in case!"

White... Things appear around him, "These are what I like to call friendliness pellets. They're made of pure LOVE. LOVE is the one thing that can defeat monsters, but is harmless to humans. Go ahead, " He sends them towards you, "Grab as many as you can!"

He notices that my soul is multicolored! He has never seen anything like that....well..he hasnt see this small of a human before either...

"What the!?....."I say when is see a heart come out.

I try to go to the door but I find that I cant leave...

I look back at flowey.

((I literally just imagined a pellet the size of me or the size of my head hitting me lol XD))



((i know the art i made isn't exact but i did this in a 2-3 hour period so I hope you like it))

"friendliness.....pellets"i say, suspicious

I was still suspicious but... oh well.

I realize that they are like my size."wait-nonono!- oof!" I get hit and knocked onto my back

Your health is knocked down to 1.

Flowey's face twists into a sadistic grin, "You Idiot! In this world, it's kill or be killed! Who could pass up a chance like Thi-"

Flowey is blown of the face of the earth before he can finish, the fireball launched at him coming from a much bigger, but ultimately MUCH nicer feeling goat. She has an aura around her that is incredibly soothing, even after all that!

"What a horrible creature, picking on a poor, innocent youth," She says.

augh...."I put a hand on my chest as I sit up

"I knew I shouldn't have trusted you....and I am not an Idiot!"I say


I hug my knees,"no please!"I say. I bury my head in my knees when I see the seeds closing in....

I wait for the end....but it doesn't come.... I lift my head just in time to see flowey get hit in the face. I then glance around, wondering where the fireball came from...

i gasp softly, seeing the giant towering goat woman. I scootch back, intimidated by her.

My hood still has my face hidden

she is looking around, confused

She smiles warmly, "There's no need to be afraid, my child." Her tone is warm and soothing.

I scootch back more, and slowly try to stand but I I fall onto my hands and knees...... I was weak from flowey's attack.

She sees movement

She picks you up, her hands soft and gentle, "How did you... How did you get so small?" She asks curiously, "You must've had a terrible fall..."

I lift my head only to see a giant hand reaching for me. I yelp slightly and flinch away. I quickly turn and try to crawl away...even though it was hopeless

"eep!" I yelp and struggle slightly when im lifted up by the back of my shirt.

I am deposited into her palm....I look up at her and my hood falls down...revealing my face. I look at her with my hazel eyes behind blue rimmed glasses. Then.....I faint from feeling weak from the attack from flowey...I lay on my side

You wake up several hours later, on a table made for two, maybe three people. Beside you sits an enormous piece of pie.

I bounce slightly in her hands as she takes me to her home. I am completely unaware of what was happening....


Hours pass and I soon stir....

I slowly open my eyes and sit up with a yawn. I glance around. Where was I? was I on a table?i dont remember falling asleep here....and.... Is that a piece of pie? It's huge!...... Oh gosh I hope that lady isnt gonna eat me!

...I suddenly remember what happened. I quickly try to stand up

((I forgot to mention that I have a small dagger but...I am not going to use it to harm others))

I stumble slightly but manage to keep my balance somehow... I suddenly feel a vibration ...I then hear footsteps. I quickly hide behind the pie...

It smelled good though...
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Lilly8780's avatar
This is cute!!
A "giant" flowey sounds scary though O.O